Improve the description of the refrigerator

[the-server-room.git] / the-server-room.inf

diff --git a/the-server-room.inf b/the-server-room.inf
index 767d2b081131da49af4ed3b0b08f1ed7912f8866..df85ed2f538400f495e93ee568cf39f82e765626 100644 (file)
--- a/the-server-room.inf
+++ b/the-server-room.inf
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@
 Constant Story "The Server Room";
 Constant Headline "^An Interactive Fiction by Daniel Bartholomew.^";
 Release 1;
-Serial "190827";
+Serial "190908";
 Constant MAX_SCORE = 6;
 Include "parser";
 Include "verblib";
@@ -62,7 +62,11 @@ Object  break_room "Break Room"
   has   light;
 
 Object  fridge "refrigerator" break_room
-  with  description "Your standard refrigerator.",
+  with  description
+            "This refrigerator makes a statement with a sleek, modern
+            and minimal stainless steel design. Featuring large doors
+            it seems quite an impressive refrigerator that can hold a
+            lot.",
         name 'fridge' 'refrigerator',
   has   container openable scenery;
 
@@ -93,7 +97,12 @@ Object  table "table" break_room
   has   supporter;
 
 Object  backpack "backpack" table
-  with  description "Your backpack.",
+  with  description
+            "This backpack looks like a modern art piece that was
+            made using brown and light blue-green watercolors. A black
+            line was traced around to make the stitching lines.
+            Well-worn and quite suitable for travel, it looks like it
+            could carry a lot of belongings.",
         name 'pack' 'back' 'bag' 'backpack',
         article "your",
         before [;
@@ -135,7 +144,6 @@ Object  hallway "Hallway"
         before [;
           Go:
             if (noun == n_obj) {
-                StartDaemon(server_room);
                 print
                     "^^You use your key card to open the server room
                     door and step into your world.^";
@@ -152,9 +160,7 @@ Object  server_room "Server Room"
             up rack 7. The little indicator light is blinking red, and
             it is beeping.",
         s_to hallway,
-        daemon [;
-            if (location ~= server_room)
-                return;
+        each_turn [;
             beeping = random(7);
             switch (beeping) {
               1: