Further tweaking to README

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 /WHAT IS LINUX/i\
 WHAT IS Linux-libre?\
 \
-  Linux-libre is a Free version of Linux (see below), suitable for\
-  use with the GNU Operating System in 100% Free System Distributions.\
+  Linux-libre is a Free version of the kernel Linux (see below),\
+  suitable for use with the GNU Operating System in 100% Free\
+  GNU/Linux-libre System Distributions.\
   http://www.gnu.org/distros/\
 \
   It removes non-Free components from Linux, that are disguised as\
   source code or distributed in separate files.  It also disables\
-  run-time requests for non-Free components, shipped separately or\
-  as part of Linux, and documentation pointing to them, so as to\
-  avoid (Free-)baiting users into the trap of non-Free Software.\
+  run-time requests for non-Free components, shipped separately or as\
+  part of Linux, and documentation pointing to them, so as to avoid\
+  (Free-)baiting users into the trap of non-Free Software.\
   http://www.fsfla.org/anuncio/2010-11-Linux-2.6.36-libre-debait\
 \
   Linux-libre started within the gNewSense GNU/Linux distribution.\
@@ -302,13 +303,13 @@ WHAT IS Linux-libre?\
 \
   Although the Linux-libre project takes a minimal-changes approach\
   to cleaning up Linux, making no effort to substitute components\
-  that need to be removed with functionally equivalent Free ones,\
-  we encouraged and support efforts towards doing so.\
+  that need to be removed with functionally equivalent Free ones, we\
+  encourage and support efforts towards doing so.\
 \
   Our mascot is Freedo, a light-blue penguin that has just come out\
-  of the the shower.  Although we like penguins, GNU is a much greater\
-  contribution to the entire system, so its mascot deserves more\
-  promotion.  See our web page for their images.\
+  of the the shower.  Although we like penguins, GNU is a much\
+  greater contribution to the entire system, so its mascot deserves\
+  more promotion.  See our web page for their images.\
   http://linux-libre.fsfla.org/\
 
 ' README 'added blurb about Linux-libre'