Update to serial 200524

[homeland.git] / src / objects / intro / sidewalk.inf

diff --git a/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf b/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf
index 3770904b2e0ebc0bd3813e8af921e2402350d3bd..b88a0ed5a8520827ec902bbb8c849eaa931fdc08 100644 (file)
--- a/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf
+++ b/src/objects/intro/sidewalk.inf
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-! Copyright (C) 2019 Jason Self <j@jxself.org>
+! Copyright (C) 2019, 2020 Jason Self <j@jxself.org>
 !
 ! This file is free software: you may copy, redistribute and/or
 ! modify it under the terms of the GNU Affero General Public License
@@ -15,12 +15,16 @@
 
 Object  Sidewalk "Sidewalk"
   with  description 
-            "You are standing on the sidewalk of a very busy street 
-            in front of your house. It is barely cloudy and already 
-            hot this morning. Smaller branches of trees are in motion 
-            from the light wind, which helps to provide some relief 
-            from the heat. Your home is to the west. Your neighbor's 
-            home is to the northwest.",
+            "You are standing on the sidewalk in front of your house. 
+            The street is normally quiet, but it's been very busy 
+            today like trying to get through a busy movie theater, 
+            and the sound of the traffic has been particularly 
+            noticeable. The traffic is a good sign of what going on 
+            in the city as a whole today. It is barely cloudy and 
+            already hot this morning. Smaller branches of trees are in 
+            motion from the light wind, which helps to provide some 
+            relief from the heat. Your home is to the west. Your 
+            neighbor's home is to the northwest.",
         n_to 
             "Some inconsiderate person parked their car on the 
             sidewalk which blocks your path. It might be nice to call